My Personal Narrative: Summer Disaster!
By: Maleia Chapman
This summer, I was in Utah in the United States and was staying at my aunt’s house! It was BURNING hot outside. I asked my mom if we could go to a pool close by called The Roy City Pool. It took it a while for her to say yes, but eventually or should I say FINALLY she said yes. We were at the pool and I was going to go on the diving board. We also went with my friend’s family too, and my friend had a one-year-old sister and more brothers too. We both headed for the diving board. First, I jumped off, then my friend jumped off, but we never knew that her little sister tagged along and was just about to jump off (And she doesn’t know how to swim) But before she could jump off, me and my friend were yelling “Go back!”, “Don’t jump!”, it was useless!“Climb off!”. And of course there are like a million people at the pool and your mom is not staring at you but everyone else is!!! It was the most embarrassing moment of my life. FINALLY her sister came off the diving board(After we helped her down and carry back which she weighed like a thousand pounds!) Let’s just say it was a summer disaster and I really don’t ever want to go back to that pool ever again! Oh, and one more thing… Me and my friend, Lydia, never told our mom’s about it ever! Not even our family or not even our dad’s and…… NEVER EVER!!!
Reflecting on my writing, I fell proud of my narrative and I think I put my best effort into it and I think my writing is funny, exciting, dramatic, and intresting! I hope to show my narrative to Lydia:)
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